http://dorothydeath.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] dorothydeath.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hrhrionastar 2011-03-11 04:12 pm (UTC)

I never understood why Cara had to betray Darken.
She could have helped him win and then told him about the future. He would have listened!

Nonetheless I like this story. It's almost unbearably emotional and very touching!

The only thing that's bothering me is the latest tendency for angst. First Becky's 12th chapter of Serpent's Tooth, then Pris' Sunset, now this...

I feel that I really need some fluff now.

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