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hrhrionastar ([personal profile] hrhrionastar) wrote2011-04-09 06:31 pm

Princess Rahl: The Heir to the Throne Chapter 14

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Title: Kidnapped! (Ch. 14 of The Heir to the Throne)
Pairing: Darken/Kahlan, background Darken/Cara, Richard/Kahlan
Length: 690
Rating: T
Warning! This chapter contains references to torture/Mord'Sith issues
Spoilers: Reckoning, mostly, but eventually there'll be a few references to things we learn later.
Summary: Reckoning AU: what if Darken and Kahlan's baby was a girl?

 

Kidnapped!

Three days. Nila had been missing for three days.

Darken was furious.

He wouldn’t let himself be worried.

He’d searched everywhere. He had quads looking throughout his kingdom. Though how she could have gone far…

Always, he came back to picturing her kidnapped, an enemy planning to use her to catch Darken off guard, weak…

He could imagine the dangers she might be in.

Could the remaining rag-tag remnants of the Resistance have murdered her? Surely Darken would know if Nila were dead…

Their shared Rahl blood was a bond impossible to erase.

Of course! That was it. Darken sat before his scrying mirror, and called with every part of himself, every last flicker of magic, for his daughter.

Kahlan had not left his side since they had discovered Nila missing. Now she asked, “Can you find her?”

“If she is anywhere in this world,” Darken replied. He did not add that he could not scry past the Veil to the Underworld—nor through a sufficiently powerful magical barrier.

If Nila were not dead, then Darken’s next fear was that she had somehow activated the World Mirror, which, some said, could not only show the skilled observer many times and places, but also transport them thither. If that were true, it would be next to impossible to find her.

Darken looked into the mirror, and as his senses extended past himself and his ornate study, he noticed one last physical sensation: Kahlan was gripping his shoulder, hard enough to bruise.

A ghost of a smile touched his lips, and then he was mere thought, following his Rahl blood to Nila.

 

 

Kahlan was frantic. The worst part was how powerless she was. She couldn’t even order the guards to stop wasting time standing around ceremonially and actually do something (honestly, Kahlan had no idea why Darken even bothered having guards in the Palace, when he demanded protection, affection, and rudimentary household service from his Mord’Sith).

And of course, she knew better than to try to talk to the Mord’Sith.

She had no magic—even if it weren’t for the Rada’Han around her neck, she had never possessed the ability to find people, or see visions, or any of the things Zedd or Shota had been able to do—Shota! Kahlan was shocked at how completely she had forgotten the sorceress, languishing in the dungeons—but what could she do to the purpose, magic bound by a Rada’Han as surely as Kahlan’s was?

Besides, despite knowing the witch-woman supported her scheme to see Richard again, Kahlan was reluctant to face her now, with or without Nila.

So she did the only thing she could—she stayed at Darken’s side, trusting that, for once, his vaunted magic might serve her purpose.

He gazed into the plain mirror, and Kahlan frowned, because she could see nothing—not even her own reflection. Her fingers dug into his shoulder as she prayed to the Creator for this to work.

Then he rose from his chair, as though in a daze, and strode to the door. Kahlan kept pace with him, her heart rising in her throat at this prospect of actual progress.

Terror nagged at her, reminding her of something Darken had once said about the Resistance plotting their children’s deaths. But the Resistance was gone—

Kahlan followed Darken through the corridors of the palace, down, down…they were nearing the dungeons, and Kahlan thought again of Shota, and then of all the other poor souls who were no doubt imprisoned there, too…

But they turned away from the door to the dungeons, turning instead into a part of the Palace Kahlan had never been in before. Almost immediately, she heard screams. Her face grew cold, and in her veins ran the Con Dar, inflaming her blood but unable to escape past her Rada’Han.

Darken went directly to one door. He pressed his palm against it, and it swung open at once.

Chains hung from the ceiling—a Mord’Sith paced in front of a small, dirty figure, her agiel humming. The girl hanging in the chains raised her chin obstinately, and Kahlan gasped.

It was Nila.

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[identity profile] 16beckyb.livejournal.com 2011-04-09 11:29 pm (UTC)(link)
We posted on the same day - How cool is that!

Is it wrong of me to hope that Darken removes the rada'han from Kahlan's neck long enough for her to go all Con Dar on Mistress Cindi? I wonder if Darken will allow Nila to confess Cindi?

So many questions!!

I loved the image of Darken reaching out with his magic to find Nila - and Kahlan standing right beside him grabbing him by the shoulder. Of course, only because she was hoping that his magic would serve her purpose, and not because they were two worried parents looking for their child (Oh, Kahlan - you are just a little in denial, I think).

Nice touch to show Kahlan's reluctance to face Shota.

And you literally left us hanging!!! Please, I need to know what happens next - like now.

Great chapter - very suspenseful.

Again - Mistress Cindi had to be delusional to think that this was a good idea. It makes me wonder if she was in love with the Mord'Sith that Nicholas confessed, or if they were related in some way. Maybe a reason for why her need for revenge would over-rule her instinct for self-preservation.
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[personal profile] meridian_rose 2011-04-10 12:02 pm (UTC)(link)
You gave me some thoughts about Cindi being punished; Nila confessing Cindi seems a very in-character response, and with some fairness to it. Nila could have been killed by her 'training', and Cindi will probably be executed anyway, so why not give Nila the opportunity for revenge. Whether she wants revenge or not would be quite interesting.

The idea that Cindi was in love with Mistress - Alina? - might have had some merit, but I think Cindi's thoughts were that she didn't overly like Alina and was just pissed that the brat could murder one of her Sisters and get away with it.

Ah, the opening to Chapter Twelve: Mistress Cindi didn’t think she was unreasonable. She served Lord Rahl with a calm efficiency that was a marvel, particularly when compared with her Sisters. She harbored little affection for any of them—particularly Dahlia, who seemed to delight in little sharp barbs about her competence, appearance, and leadership as compared to Cara’s. She hadn’t liked Cara. If Cara was killed in some magical explosion, so much the better for Cindi, new First Mistress.
But Alina was a different matter. Not that Cindi had liked her better than any of the others. Alina was older than Cindi, and if she ever felt any resentment that Cindi was the one promoted to First Mistress, she never mentioned it.
Of course, that made her that much more dangerous—but that much less irritating on a daily basis.
It was not Alina, per se, that Cindi was so devastated to lose.
She wasn’t sure what it was—security perhaps?
All she knew was that she was not anxious to let those horrible little monstrous children get away with this.

[identity profile] 16beckyb.livejournal.com 2011-04-10 02:19 pm (UTC)(link)
I should have gone back and re-read that, but couldn't remember what chapter it was in.

I am eager to see how Mistress Cindi meets her end. It would be hard to imagine that Nila would not want revenge, after everything she's been put through at this woman's hands.

[identity profile] hrhrionastar.livejournal.com 2011-04-10 05:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Nila confessing Cindi seems a very in-character response, and with some fairness to it. Nila could have been killed by her 'training', and Cindi will probably be executed anyway, so why not give Nila the opportunity for revenge. Whether she wants revenge or not would be quite interesting. All good points! Nila's only just started understanding how angry Cindi is - certainly she might want revenge, but for Nila there's the additional priority of Ruxsendra. Then, of course, I have various ideas about when Confessor powers come into effect...after all, if Nila could have, she probably would have Confessed Cindi already - unless that just didn't occur to her...

Cindi's thoughts were that she didn't overly like Alina and was just pissed that the brat could murder one of her Sisters and get away with it. Pretty much - Darken marrying Kahlan and setting her children over all others wasn't universally popular, and the Mord'Sith hate Confessors...Darken may have underestimated the effect of this. He always assumes the Mord'Sith are totally loyal, in spite of some evidence to the contrary.

[identity profile] hrhrionastar.livejournal.com 2011-04-10 05:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you :D

We posted on the same day - How cool is that! RL has been pretty hectic lately, and my muse has been struggling - but it was nice to see the next chapter of Serpent, and be reminded about Princess Rahl ;D

Is it wrong of me to hope that Darken removes the rada'han from Kahlan's neck long enough for her to go all Con Dar on Mistress Cindi? I wonder if Darken will allow Nila to confess Cindi? We'll see...but Darken might want to kill Cindi himself ;)

(Oh, Kahlan - you are just a little in denial, I think). Oh, absolutely :D Denial is a big part of my characterization of Kahlan, I think.

Mistress Cindi had to be delusional to think that this was a good idea. It makes me wonder if she was in love with the Mord'Sith that Nicholas confessed, or if they were related in some way. Maybe a reason for why her need for revenge would over-rule her instinct for self-preservation. Fascinating idea - although for continuity's sake, I'd have to agree with Lisa - Cindi's outrage isn't necessarily on Alina's behalf so much as the entire Sisterhood. One flaw in her thinking, of course, is that she blames Nila for something Nicholas did - and once you decide one thing that's false is true, you can make anything seem reasonable.

Please, I need to know what happens next - like now. Yay! And soon :D
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[personal profile] meridian_rose 2011-04-10 11:49 am (UTC)(link)
I'm glad to see Darken worried about Nila, and that he's finally put his panic aside and thought about using his Rahl magic to find her - and you add in another bit of info about the World Mirror, which I want to see more of :D

“If she is anywhere in this world,” Darken replied. He did not add that he could not scry past the Veil to the Underworld—nor through a sufficiently powerful magical barrier. I see this as Darken not wanting to worry Kahlan further, a sweet gesture.

because she could see nothing—not even her own reflection I'm interested in how the scrying mirror works, what it looks like...

Surely Darken had Mord'Sith search the Palace, even the dungeons, knowing his daughter is reckless and rather fearless? So more than one head will roll for this, I'd imagine.

Becky's comment about Nila confessing Cindi seems a very in-character response, and with some fairness to it. Nila could have been killed by her 'training', and Cindi will probably be executed anyway, so why not give Nila the opportunity for revenge. Whether she wants revenge or not would be quite interesting.


[identity profile] hrhrionastar.livejournal.com 2011-04-10 07:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you :D

you add in another bit of info about the World Mirror, which I want to see more of :D Hmmm...definitely possible ;D My personal theory is that Darken found the first Box of Orden in the People's Palace attics. And the World Mirror is definitely very powerful.

Surely Darken had Mord'Sith search the Palace, even the dungeons, knowing his daughter is reckless and rather fearless? So more than one head will roll for this, I'd imagine.
Hmmm - could be - but then, Darken never expects his Mord'Sith to betray him. From his point of view, an outside enemy would make more sense - so you can imagine how betrayed he feels...

Becky's comment about Nila confessing Cindi seems a very in-character response, and with some fairness to it. Nila could have been killed by her 'training', and Cindi will probably be executed anyway, so why not give Nila the opportunity for revenge. Whether she wants revenge or not would be quite interesting. We'll see ;D

[identity profile] dorothydeath.livejournal.com 2011-04-10 12:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww))) Darken and Kahlan both worried... it's so sweet! Awwwww)) I need more Darken/Kahlan! ^_^

And I'm dying to read what happens next! Such a cruel cliffhanger! :D
Have mercy!!)))

And I so wish Darken would remove the Rada'Han! You know all reasons why. ;)

[identity profile] dorothydeath.livejournal.com 2011-04-10 12:24 pm (UTC)(link)
...all the reasons.

I still hope, you know. ^_^

[identity profile] hrhrionastar.livejournal.com 2011-04-10 07:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you :D

Awww))) Darken and Kahlan both worried... it's so sweet! Awwwww)) I need more Darken/Kahlan! ^_^ They're definitely bonding over this... ;D

And I so wish Darken would remove the Rada'Han! You know all reasons why. ;) Actually, I did have an idea about that, but you'll have to be patient, I'm afraid ;D

[identity profile] dorothydeath.livejournal.com 2011-04-10 08:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Actually, I did have an idea about that
OMG! Will there be that moment? You know what I mean.

I will be patient! I will be super-duper patient!!

[identity profile] hrhrionastar.livejournal.com 2011-04-10 08:16 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG! Will there be that moment? You know what I mean. We'll see ;D

I love your enthusiasm - you make me smile :D

[identity profile] dorothydeath.livejournal.com 2011-04-10 11:19 pm (UTC)(link)
We'll see ;D
You're such a shameless tease! :D

Yeah... I tend to be overly emotional over the things I like very much... Can't help it. ^_^

BTW you can have this icon if you like))

[identity profile] hrhrionastar.livejournal.com 2011-04-11 04:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww, thank you :D You're so sweet :D

[identity profile] dorothydeath.livejournal.com 2011-04-11 04:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Darken/Dahlia FTW! :D

I hope you'll make sure to use this icon when (uh-huh, when) posting something for my Darken/Dahlis prompt. ^_^
(That was my evil plan! Mwa-ha-ha))))

You're welcome! :-*

[identity profile] hrhrionastar.livejournal.com 2011-04-11 10:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Cunning ;D

I make no promises, though...RL is so busy, and I never know if I'll actually be able to write something until I'm already halfway done with it... ;)

[identity profile] dorothydeath.livejournal.com 2011-04-11 11:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, I'm super-duper patient, remember? ;D

But anyway - thank you! ^_^

[identity profile] dorothydeath.livejournal.com 2011-04-10 04:36 pm (UTC)(link)
*rereads*
This chapter makes me so inexplicably happy! ^_^
Thank you!

[identity profile] hrhrionastar.livejournal.com 2011-04-10 07:55 pm (UTC)(link)
This chapter makes me so inexplicably happy! ^_^ Aww! Thank you :D Darken + Kahlan 4-ever!

(Although I still love your Darken/Dahlia icon :D)

[identity profile] dorothydeath.livejournal.com 2011-04-10 08:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes! Darken and Kahlan are made for each other!)))

I just don't have a Darken/Kahlan icon so my Darken/Dahlia one (they are still my OTP despite my crazy love for Darken/Kahlan) goes in its stead.

Aww)) Thank you! :D